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Wednesday, April 14, 2010

i love the people around me
shackled together by chains
chains of the people
for the people
by the people
humbled chained animals
feasting on crumbs
left by those unchained

4 comments:

zachary said...

sorry i edited this like 3000 times.

Nevine said...

I loved the repetition of "chains" here, Zachary. It's like the looping of chains using vocal imagery. Amazing!

Nevine

yunita said...

agree..loved the repetition.
feels good when you're saying it too..

zachary said...

thank you guys:)